Drafting and Planning: feedback to first draft

After publishing my first draft on my blog I was given feedback on what I could improve upon.

Front cover: 

I was told that my front cover was effective and realistic and that the use of the colour yellow on the front cover really stood out and highlighted key aspects of the front cover, however I was then told to make use of the colours my artist was wearing such as navy blue and maroon in order to link the house style together. 

I was then told the name of my magazine may not be as effective as I hoped, hence why I changed the name to SLAY.

Contents; 

To improve my contents page I was told to make the text a bit bigger and be aware of colours not showing up as some of the page numbers did not show up on the back ground.

Double page spread:

For my double page spread I was told the writing for my article was too big and was not even on both sides but that the Use of having the P in the background was effective.